Вот этот небезызвестный в покрасочном мире человек*
выставил свои оценки конкурсным работам. Привожу оригинал сообщения:
#1- Score : 7
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...oka/1qazxsw.jpg
Nice and clean piece, but the colors lack contrast; blues should go darker in some recesses and a bit brighter on top of the head. The visage is very nice though.
#2- Score : 8
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...oka/2sgwjrt.jpg
Good color control and desaturation. Scratches are well executed but there could be better definition between the features and armor plates, the chest area is hard to "read"a bit more blacklining between the features would have pushed this into the 9's
#3- Score : 9
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...ooka/3zrdsg.jpg
Clean and well defined piece. Displays a good comprehension of zenithal lighting. The focal points, sword and face, are very clean and stand out as they should. I wish there was a bigger color difference between the NMM gold and the bone color to make them stand out.
#4- Score : 7.5
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...booka/4dghq.jpg
Very clean and well defined piece. The color choices work well, but il lacks contrast. More light on the robe, darker zones to create contrast would really make him stand out. The base does not do teh model justice.
#5- Score : 8.5
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...ooka/5tnfgt.jpg
Very crisp paintjob, good use of light, and a refines base to match. Though teh head cloth shows zenithal lighting, going brighter at the very top would have created an even more striking point of focus on the model. Nose and cheekbones could also be brighter, whjile shading darker on the side of the visage to increase contrast on the face. Don't be afraid to increase the lighting at top of model some more!
#6- Score : 7
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...oka/61fdghf.jpg
Nice colors and freehand, but the blending is not very smooth. Areas of different colors could be better defined with darker lines in-between to make each element stand out, it looks a bit blurry right now.
#7- Score : 8.5
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...zbooka/7muy.jpg
Very nice conversion. Color composition is very organic and fitting, but the small pictures seem to hide lack of refinement in the blends. Makes an outstanding gaming piece, but for display painting, it lacks some more refined techniques. There is no focus of light, overall brighter at the top, darker at the bottom of the model. Research and apply zenithal lighting to your models and you will have a winner every time!
#8- Score : 7
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...ooka/8xfhmm.jpg
Nice play with colors, th shades in the base are very interesting. Unfortunately, the model looks a bit messy and unrefined. The desaturated blue and green used are too close together, it is hard to tell them apart, which further blurs the model. You should brighten the top of your model with paler blues, the visage should be blended brighter (keep the shade colors though, very nice), this higher contrast will make the model easier to understand and make features such as the face stand out more.
#9- Score : 7.5
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...booka/9zsfd.jpg
Nice and clean paintjob, shows the painter is refined. Do not be afraid to increase the contrast, go darker on the bottom of armor plates such as lower part of teh face mask. Yellow armor can go from beige to bestial brown and still look yellow if done right. Res on the shoulders should be brighter to show the light; mix some bronzed flesh+white with scab red and use for hilighting your red at the highest spots on the model.
#10- Score : 4
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...ka/10dfttkj.jpg
The picture is very bad and it is hard to see the details. It looks like there is blending work involved, but the green sholder also looks messy. As I can only judge the picture of the model, I can't give it more than 4.
#11- Score : 8
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...booka/11tyn.jpg
An interesting piece, lots of nice freehand. The blackligning is too heavy and thick, and the colors lack contrast. I wish it was all blended like the knife instead of using lines and freehand to fill the surfaces. More color contast on the face, instead of going from pale skintone to black, would add more life to the model. Very nice conversion/sculpt, individual parts show more skill than the overall piece, if that makes sense to you.
#12- Score : 8.5
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...a/12dmiuras.jpg
Nice, clean, well defined piece. Smooth blends, and I applaud you for painting the flames correctly, yellow center to red outside. The black is a bit rushed, using grey lines of actualy blending to grey. Mixing a bit of silver in your gold for hilights would also improve it. To increase the score, I would make green brighter at top of fist and head, and keep teh greens the way they are at the bottom, again more enphasis on zenithal lighting would make it shine. Finally, shading the white salamanders symbol on the shoulderpad would help make it more consistent.
#13- Score : 6.5
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/GlasS...ka/131cgbvj.jpg
The NMM is on it's way but not quie there; there are color problems with the Halo spikes on the left, not quite the same color. The different features are also not as well defined as they should, such as the roses onto the sword and the cherubs. There seems to be dust problems in the paint of the back of the cloak. Brightening the upper third of the red cloak, and darkening the recesses between folds of the cloak would make it stand our, don't be afraid to use more scab red and black in diluted layers to gradually darken these folds. The base is very nice and displays light nicely.
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И напоследок: шлите tiffы, дорогие участники, занявшие места с 1 по 10. Иначе в журнале будут красоваться мутноватые картинки, взятые прямо с конкурса.
Прислали мне пока только следующие люди:
Накатан, Юстас, охоtnik-kod.
FFF и ZHaDum насколько я понял - в процессе. Остальные молчат. Осталось всего 10 дней, давайте, пора.
